Adolescence
She was 15, He was 9,
She came daily for bread, biscuit and wine.
Never before he felt attracted towards girls,
Looking at her he realized females have a different form.
Short skirts revealed her legs,
His hands trembled filling up bag of eggs.
Now his eyes kept gazing at her breast,
Her loose bra straps made him sweat.
This went on as years passed by,
Suddenly she started coming with a guy.
His childhood fantasy was shattered by reality,
He stopped talking to her sweetly!
She was ignorant of his love,
Confused by his behavior she stopped visiting the store.
Time ran by and he became mature,
Adolescence is an age when everyone falls in love.
But his love for her was divine,
I bet he shall never forget her in this life!
She came daily for bread, biscuit and wine.
Never before he felt attracted towards girls,
Looking at her he realized females have a different form.
Short skirts revealed her legs,
His hands trembled filling up bag of eggs.
Now his eyes kept gazing at her breast,
Her loose bra straps made him sweat.
This went on as years passed by,
Suddenly she started coming with a guy.
His childhood fantasy was shattered by reality,
He stopped talking to her sweetly!
She was ignorant of his love,
Confused by his behavior she stopped visiting the store.
Time ran by and he became mature,
Adolescence is an age when everyone falls in love.
But his love for her was divine,
I bet he shall never forget her in this life!
8 Comments:
Is the 9 year old u??? ;)
I c that bra-straps have found a place on most blogs now :-P
I am more concerned about 15 year old girl who was she? Awaiting your reply, atleast I am curious to understand strap - sweat theory :)
nice one Purvin.
"Adolescence" the word says it all.
It is when you first fall in love & also experience your first heart break (in most cases). Thrilling times ... You discover the other species.
Sal- Don’t worry the bra strap shall find more place in coming blogs J And I never worked at a bakery store… so it can’t be me… Yaar mein to seedh bacha tha…. Aisa sub kuch nahi soochta tha ;)
Shubh- Its too abstract.. to make a direct relation .. but try to imagine whatever you want to.. that shall be your fantasy!! and I the characters are totally abstract!!! Next poem shall tell you about this 15 yr old girl when she is 35!!!
Chintan- Ya … adolescences ma future life ka trailer dekne ko mil jata hai!!
I guess, nowadays all 'good' posts (be it poems or prose) has to contain 'bra-straps'
or mebbe it's the other way around... thats what makes them 'good' posts :)
newayz...well written!!!
bakery ke bacche se JJWS ki yaad aa gayi.
How come you are dreaming 9. In 4 years you will be 20 + 9. =))
Sumedh: Reading through all the bra strap blogs.. I got inspired!!!
Niki:- I shall be physically 20+ but dil se abhi bhi 9 sal ka hi hu!!!heheh
Yaar mein to seedh bacha tha….
*ahem ahem*
Ab nahi raha... :-P
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