Saturday, April 14, 2007

Bring it to me!

Bring it to me,
I wanna see,
What’s left in me!

Bring it to me,
Drown me deep down!
Where rising be the only path!

Bring it to me,
Drag me into darkness,
Where the light of hope is the only road!

Bring it to me,
Run tears down the cheeks,
Where smiles of time will fade away the salty liquids!

Bring it to me,
Break my heart!
But hey, there’s no way you break my soul!

So, bring it to me,
Bring it to me,
And I shall see
What’s left in me!
~Purvin

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Purvin boss, good poem and i liked the last stanza the best ...good work and let them flow more...

1:49 PM  
Blogger Chintan said...

ekdum solid likha hai boss. Testing your mettle, eh?

4:26 PM  
Blogger SAL said...

Good one, truly!
But, I wonder what intense occurred that made you write this.

7:24 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey purvin.. some deep words indeed!! really liked your poem!

4:49 PM  
Blogger Kaushal said...

Good one Purvin....

I wish I could write something like that..:P

8:55 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Purvinnnnn..long time man...come up with somethiing new mannnn..
K.

1:08 AM  

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